Seven or eight years ago I went through
Winged Victory and did some detective work, just for fun. I’ve dug it out and refreshed my memory on my conclusions. To answer your question about Beale. This appears to have been Captain
Sydney Philip Smith, who was shot down on April 6 1918 by von Richthofen for his 76th victory. I’ve had a preliminary look at the letter in OTF Vol 6 No.4 about Yeates. I’ll dig a little deeper over the next few days but initial points I’ve seen are these. Yeates appears to have left 46 Squadron for HE on 30 August 1918. I have a copy of his logbook and the last entry is on this date. As far as I can tell from his logbook he joined on 17 Feb 1918, so if he left in August this would give him with the squadron for about six months, which is about the usual time for a tour. Unlike most pilots he doesn’t actually state in his logbook when he joined and when he left the squadron, but I think it can be taken that these dates shown in his logbook are when he joined and when he left. In WV Yeates relates the death of the CO in a collision and George Evans makes much of this in his letter to OTF, but the CO in question was Major A H O’Hara Wood, who collided with LL Saunders on October 4 1918, which was after Yeates had left 46. I suspect that someone from 46 visited Yeates in England, either at the end of the war or just after, and told him about the collision, which Yeates then used in WV. He obviously didn’t like O’Hara Wood!
By my notes in my copy, Yeates seems to have been out on some of his dates. Everything is OK and chronological until he gets to ‘on the next day, the Sunday before Easter’. Up to this date the days are OK and this day should follow as 24 March, but Easter Sunday in 1918 was actually on 24 March, not the Sunday before. So things get slight out of sync by a week. This is rectified later. I’ll go through the notes in more detail when I get time and you can then work out for yourself the sequence of events. I’ll try to clarify anything that you aren’t sure about.
What a lot of aviation buffs seem to overlook is that Yeates was a magnificent writer, quite apart from the subject matter. His death was a great loss to English literature